I want students to submit a Google slide as an external tool, but I also want other students to comment on them. What do I do to make that happen? Right now I can't see how other students can see submissions.
With Assignment submissions there really isn't a good way for other students to see them. It's really meant more for a direct submission to the instructor. Have you thought about using a Discussion instead? By nature discussions are meant for everyone in the class to see and even respond to, and they can be graded. I suggest creating a graded discussion and asking students to post the url to their Google Presentation in it. Or, the presentation can be embedded. Here is a helpful link for your students to show them how How do I create a hyperlink or embed a file from Google Drive into the Rich Content Editor as a student?
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